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应用文专题复习——求助信

作者:陆赟  日期: 2025-04-01  点击:

宜兴市周铁中学高二英语高考应用文写作专题复习(一)

求助信

I.真题细目表

年份

卷名

命题形式

题材

体裁

词数

分值

2020

全国卷III

文字提纲

请外教帮忙指导自己和同学改编的短剧

求助信

100词左右

25

2016

全国卷I

文字提纲

请外教修改所附材料的文字和格式

求助信

100词左右

25

 

II. 求助信——就某个问题(困难)的求助信件,要写清楚(要点包括):

1)表达请求; 

2)说明具体情况,交代求助内容;            

3)表达感谢。

 

假设你是高三学生李华, 正在忙着备战高考,但是发现很难集中精力学习,请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件,向他求助。
1. 你的困难;
2. 寻求帮助。
注意:	1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
III. 真题详解

 

四步作文法

第一步 审题谋篇

1.体裁 求助信

2.时态 一般现在

3.人称 第一人称为主

 

第二步 要点要全

1. 我叫李华,是一名高三学生。

____________________________________________________________________.

2. 我正在忙着备战高考,但是发现很难集中精力学习,因此写信求助。

Recently, I ____________________________________ my college entrance exams. But unfortunately I find it a challenge to ___________________________. Therefore, ____________________________________________________________________.

3. 有些问题严重困扰了我。作业太多,没有时间运动。

Some problems _______________________________________________________.

I ___________________________________________________________________.

I____________________________________________________________________.

4. 我越想老师和父母的殷切期望就越感压力沉重。

The more I ___________________________________________,

the more_______________________________________________.

5. 最让我头疼的是每晚都难以入睡。

_______________________________________ is that it’s a headache for me to fall asleep every night.

6. 面对以上所有这些问题,我急切想得到你的帮助. 如果你能够快速回复,我讲万分感激。

______________all the above, I’m ________________________________________. I’d ______________ if you could _________________________________________.

 

第三步 句式要美

1.句2中“忙于”升级为高频短语

_________________________________________________________________.

2.句3合并为非谓语动词作状语形式

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

 

第四步 衔接要顺(请添加适当的连接词,将上述要点句子组合成文,注意书写字迹)

 

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

IV.求助信语料库

1. I find it difficult/challenging/demanding to learn English well. So I’m writing to ask you for help.

2. I find it really a challenge/headache for me to learn English well. So I'd like to turn to for help and guidance.

3. These days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, I badly need your help.

4. Faced with the challenge of learning English well, I'm writing for your generous help and assistance.

5. I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited vocabulary.

6. I often fail to manage the proper use of English words, putting me in an embarrassing situation.

7. Though having learned English for years, I find communicating with native speakers in English remains a big headache to me.

8. I really have no idea how to improve my listening skills.

9. What troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work.

10. I would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance.

11. I would appreciate it if you could give me a hand and I'm looking forward to your earliest reply.

12. I would highly appreciate your timely/prompt reply. /Your timely/prompt reply would be highly appreciated.

 

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(2020年全国卷III)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介;
2. 指导内容;
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
V. 模拟实战